To be fair, I sped read everything for what to do. In conclusion, everything runs well and have not run into any bugs. Either due to language barrier or no 'How to play' instructions. Speaking from the perspective of someone who is not used to text based games, or never played one till now. Everything was simple and there were enough clues. Speaking from the perspective of someone who is used to playing text based games. Jeschke's text games and several others on this site also have instructions in them for beginners. It introduces all the tropes within text based games so games like this are not so confusing. I suggest trying Valente and Nuku's 'Flexible Survival'. For those not used to text oriented games. Skittles209 wrote:Wonderful first attempt at creating a text based game. You’re right that the ending paragraph probably should have been longer but, at this point, I just needed to finish the damn game so I could move onto other things.

I considered making a morning section, but it would have been TOO much work, and I have other work that I need to get on with. It would have been nice to have some more digestion and scat throughout the night or even another early morning portion of the game including those things.īut it was a good game and story overall, and I definitely enjoyed it.

I also felt the story didn't give a lot of insight into other people's storylines during the night portion of the story. I know they spoke about their point of views on him being eaten, but I mean in regards to the scat part in particular and the ending paragraph.

For one thing, I felt the ending paragraph was too brief and didn't allow us to see the impact of Michael's fate on each individual family member and their opinions about it. Cancer wrote:I liked the game overall, but there are a few things that were a little underwhelming in my opinion.

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